Do you want useful professional feedback from Edwan?
First, congratulations on taking this step! It may not be easy to ask for help. But pretty often, an external view on your track can help a lot! Even if the feedback doesn't come from a domain expert, think about this: your audience is composed of people who don't make music, and who can definitely tell you if they hear something is off, or if something sounds great. However, non-musicians likely won't have the words to describe what they hear, or to describe what actions you can take to improve your song.
Before ordering a feedback here, there are several things you can do to to learn more about your struggles:
Take a break and distance yourself a bit from your project: go for a walk, hangout with friends, listen to your song in different contexts (AirPods, car, Hi-Fi system). This will give you a fresh perspective on your project, and potentially new ideas on what you can improve.
Ask your close ones: Consider asking a trusted person in your family, friends or colleague! They may not give you the most precise feedback, but it is likely that there is something in your song that they will appreciate more, and something that they will appreciate less. Take their feedback with a grain of salt. However, remember that music is meant to be shared with others! So blast that song in your friends' car now!
Work on the chord progression: the last chord sounds wrong. Turn this last (major) chord into a minor chord. That way, the overall chord progression will sound much more natural and catchy.
Two leads are playing two different melodies at the same time. You have two solutions:
Put one of the two leads one octave lower, remove some of its high frequencies, and add some reverb on it to push it backwards in the mix. Make this "low-octave" melody start playing at half of the drop only, to add interest.
Remove one of the melodies, and play the same melody with the second lead.
