I (Edwan) will send you a written/video feedback about your track. This feedback will allow you to identify the weaknesses in your mix, structure and melodies. It will allow you to bring your track to the next level, and you will be able to make your track more clean and catchy.
If the track is good enough (before or after feedback), you can get it signed to my label Tropicat Records!
See below for an example of feedback!
I will review the following aspects of your track:
Work on the chord progression: the last chord sounds wrong. Turn this last (major) chord into a minor chord. That way, the overall chord progression will sound much more natural and catchy.
Two leads are playing two different melodies at the same time. You have two solutions:
Put one of the two leads one octave lower, remove some of its high frequencies, and add some reverb on it to push it backwards in the mix. Make this "low-octave" melody start playing at half of the drop only, to add interest.
Remove one of the melodies, and play the same melody with the second lead.